In this version Dave makes it to the hotel without eating eggs. He makes it to the hotel, but now he is hungry. The weed isn't worn off yet, but most of it has subsided. He was thinking looking around, his mouth was dry. He asked the front desk if he could have some water, and if there was a Paul Garlick staying. Yeah, they said over there theres a bar. He didn't for a split second know what question they answered. So he he looked at them a little longer, and the person behind the desk looked up with just their eyes, then back down. Without looking up they pointed, its over there. Their long finger pointing straight, then there, they pointed to the left. Past the pool. Guests only. Then they typed away.
Dave was cautious for some reason, mostly because he was still a bit high, and he couldn't tell if how they moved was weird, or he was just a bit stoned. He tasted his mouth. Damn he thought, I hope they have ice. Especially in those red cups. Then he made a sound like he just drank a diet coke on a hot summer day. AHhhhh. That relaxed him. He went into the bar, looked around. A sad business guy, and the bartender, and Dave.
Dave was cautious for some reason, mostly because he was still a bit high, and he couldn't tell if how they moved was weird, or he was just a bit stoned. He tasted his mouth. Damn he thought, I hope they have ice. Especially in those red cups. Then he made a sound like he just drank a diet coke on a hot summer day. AHhhhh. That relaxed him. He went into the bar, looked around. A sad business guy, and the bartender, and Dave.