Nice trolling with us. I would've never guessed that this was that kind of psychic until the end. haha.
I respect how much you can actually get into the scene and the character though.
you know how they have
method acting
? Well when you write these snippets I feel like you really give respect to what's happening rather than interjecting yourself the writer into it. I struggle with this. So much that often when people are reading my fiction they think it's just me writing about myself lol.