Fist as weapon - IV

I was halfway through shaving when they arrived at the door. I thought about finishing up really quick before answering but by the sound of their buzzing I could tell they were in a hurry. I carried my razor with me to the door as to signal that I wasn't some crazy person who only shaved half my face, but that I was in fact still in the middle of it.

"Hi. Police. Are you--" they asked me by name. I nodded.

"You're needed down at the station for questioning. So if you wouldn't mind, could you please come with us?"

"Sure, but could I finish shaving?" I said while sticking out my razor.

"Of course."

I left the door open while I went into my bathroom to finish up. They didn't come inside my apartment though.

I finished off the left side of my face, put some lotion on, and gave myself one last look in the mirror. Then I grabbed a sweatshirt and headed back to the foyer where the two policemen were waiting.

"I'm ready."

"Okay, let's go then."
I don't know who your main character is but he kept it cool and complied with the law enforcement officers. I guess the plot twist comes later.
I like how pictural everything is, you used mundane elements such as shaving alternated with inner reflections to paint a picture that appears very real. 👍 bravo
2021-11-20 17:31:47
You'll see in the next parts. He's just an ordinary dude.
2021-11-22 15:37:05

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