Shit! The anti Butch and Wallace scene from 

Pulp Fiction

!!

This line was really good: I felt a chemical drunkness, something in his eyes scared the shit out of me,

Simple but well placed to elicit an affect.

And then when I thought Tim was screwed, it was great to have Don show up in that manner.

and even greater that for a moment you made me believe that Don knew what was happening and that he would save the day.

And then even greater! when it turned out he was just a drunk idiot too and now both Tim and Don are going to be fucked. wow. 

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