dave flies to westcity dark social media McDonalds Westcity lifestyle business trip

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Although he drove all night, Dave was no where near falling asleep. The
dark
, being unable to see the details of the terrain, brought his mind to a corner of his past. Memories he had forgotten. One vivid memory was of how he had met a man named Peter.

Dave refrained from watching his past life on
social media
. He had no clue what his ex wife and kids were up to. Or what they looked like. He'd imagine that they looked the same. Just older.

Peter was never a part of Dave's life. A stranger who appeared one weekend and departed the next. Such a man Dave kept tabs on using social media. The man was interesting. He posted artistic shots of his 
lifestyle
. Who knew whether they were genuine or not. But after years of following him, he had forgotten how he had come to learn of Peter in the first place.

It had taken place at the Three Kings Hotel somewhere out in the middle of nowhere. His firm had assigned him a 
business trip
that nobody else was eager to take. Dave wouldn't have accepted either except for the fact that he wished to get away from his wife and kids for a bit.

By this point in his life Dave no longer looked forward to his travels. He had gone to so many different cities and they had all offered the same underlying offerings to him that now going to a new city felt about as exciting as stopping by a new 
McDonalds
off the side of the highway. Different details, same shit.

Westcity
? What a queer name he'd thought to himself. He did no research. Simply arrived at the airport on time. And on the plane he fell asleep. Even though the flight was under two hours.
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Glad to hear. I was trying to figure out how to hone my ability to write scenes, so I figured finding scenes from novels that have stuck with me and rewriting them with topics that are closer to me would be an interesting exercise. 

I enjoy deciding what to keep, what to delete, how changing certain aspects changes the scene, etc. I can recommend it, even if just once. It's like doing isolation exercises at the gym, I don't have to create the scene, just tinker and rework one I already love.
2023-05-12 13:45:34
The Great Gatsby. When Nick first goes to Daisy and Tom's house
2023-05-14 21:36:19

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